Jack Horne Poet Rhyme

Birthday Unicorn

The unicorn was soaring high;
I watched it fly across the sky.
A regal beast of snowy white,
Its horn was like a stalagmite;
Its wingspan took my breath away.
I smiled with joy to hear it neigh -
But then I spotted on its back,
A grinning rider, dressed in black:
PD was out with her new pet;
She waved and zoomed off like a jet.
And as they flew towards the sun,
I knew her birthday would be fun.

Jack Horne, with love to PD on her birthday ***

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Line Gauthier September 22, 2017 at 7:28 PM Lucky PD to receive such a delightful poem on her birthday !! Very well crafted.

Tahera Mannan October 6, 2012 at 12:18 AM Many congrats Jack for this wonderful win.

Cynthia Alvez October 5, 2012 at 8:31 PM Jack, what an awesome verse! A most special gift for PD. A much deserved 1st place win. Cynthia

Olusegun Arowolo October 5, 2012 at 5:26 PM Splendid!nice write,Jack.Congratulations on your superb win...

Carol Sunshine Brown October 5, 2012 at 1:08 PM Congratulations on your super win in P.D.'s "Unicorn" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Bukang Liwayway October 5, 2012 at 11:03 AM A very beautiful dedication to our dear friend PD on her very special day…Big Congratulationsfriend Jack!!! Hugs!!

Gwendolen Song October 5, 2012 at 10:33 AM Holy cow! This is GRRRrrreat! I am so impressed with this poem for her bday!! U captured her playfulness with style!! Wonderful win, Jack!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl October 5, 2012 at 10:24 AM Knew she would just love this one Jack congratulations and well done xx

Lee Ramage October 5, 2012 at 8:56 AM So nice, great poem for PD. Congrats on your win. Lee

Nette Onclaud October 5, 2012 at 8:53 AM applause to you for your spectacular win, jack.. :) huggs

Poet Destroyer A October 5, 2012 at 7:19 AM Jack. Congratulations, with my Unicorn Birthday Poem... Ain't I just a greedy one..LOL.. love always~ The Poet Sweet Destroyer ~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 4, 2012 at 7:39 AM ELOQUENT DESCRIPTION OF A UNICORN AND A PERFECT GIFT FOR pd .. GOOD LUCK TO U JACK MY FRIEND ..LUV

Debbie Duncan October 2, 2012 at 11:48 PM very good poem ,,, P D will like it too ;}

Len Gasun October 2, 2012 at 9:28 AM wow!!!!! so great.... really great..... i love it jack! i am sure, the celebrity, our dear friend PD will love it, too! t Good luck always!! hugs:) Leonora

Nette Onclaud October 1, 2012 at 1:03 PM a zestful storyline with wonderful twists and turns, jack.. winning huggs!..:)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 30, 2012 at 8:46 AM Nice Jack boy, well done, can you see you two off on a unicorn...don't get caught will you xx

Poet Destroyer A September 29, 2012 at 10:18 PM Jack, I'm having an early start enjoying my contest...yes, i know I should not be peeking...but, i can't help it.. I'm naughty and have no patients... hugs...pd

Russell Sivey September 29, 2012 at 4:18 PM This is a sweet entry into PD's contest my friend! I really enjoyed reading this clever poem this evening! This was an extremely fun write to read Jack, Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick September 29, 2012 at 1:22 PM Great one for PD on her birthday..I got a chuckle..I know she will love this one..Good luck if this is also a contest..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always encouraging and uplifting..Sara