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Birthday Unicorn

The unicorn was soaring high; I watched it fly across the sky. A regal beast of snowy white, Its horn was like a stalagmite; Its wingspan took my breath away. I smiled with joy to hear it neigh - But then I spotted on its back, A grinning rider, dressed in black: PD was out with her new pet; She waved and zoomed off like a jet. And as they flew towards the sun, I knew her birthday would be fun. Jack Horne, with love to PD on her birthday ***

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/22/2017 7:28:00 PM
Lucky PD to receive such a delightful poem on her birthday !! Very well crafted.
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Date: 10/6/2012 12:18:00 AM
Many congrats Jack for this wonderful win.
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Date: 10/5/2012 8:31:00 PM
Jack, what an awesome verse! A most special gift for PD. A much deserved 1st place win. Cynthia
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Date: 10/5/2012 5:26:00 PM
Splendid!nice write,Jack.Congratulations on your superb win...
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Date: 10/5/2012 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in P.D.'s "Unicorn" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2012 11:03:00 AM
A very beautiful dedication to our dear friend PD on her very special day…Big Congratulationsfriend Jack!!! Hugs!!
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Date: 10/5/2012 10:33:00 AM
Holy cow! This is GRRRrrreat! I am so impressed with this poem for her bday!! U captured her playfulness with style!! Wonderful win, Jack!!
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Date: 10/5/2012 10:24:00 AM
Knew she would just love this one Jack congratulations and well done xx
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Date: 10/5/2012 8:56:00 AM
So nice, great poem for PD. Congrats on your win. Lee
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Date: 10/5/2012 8:53:00 AM
applause to you for your spectacular win, jack.. :) huggs
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Date: 10/5/2012 7:19:00 AM
Jack. Congratulations, with my Unicorn Birthday Poem... Ain't I just a greedy one..LOL.. love always~ The Poet Sweet Destroyer ~
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Date: 10/4/2012 7:39:00 AM
ELOQUENT DESCRIPTION OF A UNICORN AND A PERFECT GIFT FOR pd .. GOOD LUCK TO U JACK MY FRIEND ..LUV
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Date: 10/2/2012 11:48:00 PM
very good poem ,,, P D will like it too ;}
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Date: 10/2/2012 9:28:00 AM
wow!!!!! so great.... really great..... i love it jack! i am sure, the celebrity, our dear friend PD will love it, too! t Good luck always!! hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/1/2012 1:03:00 PM
a zestful storyline with wonderful twists and turns, jack.. winning huggs!..:)
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Date: 9/30/2012 8:46:00 AM
Nice Jack boy, well done, can you see you two off on a unicorn...don't get caught will you xx
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Date: 9/29/2012 10:18:00 PM
Jack, I'm having an early start enjoying my contest...yes, i know I should not be peeking...but, i can't help it.. I'm naughty and have no patients... hugs...pd
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Date: 9/29/2012 4:18:00 PM
This is a sweet entry into PD's contest my friend! I really enjoyed reading this clever poem this evening! This was an extremely fun write to read Jack, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/29/2012 1:22:00 PM
Great one for PD on her birthday..I got a chuckle..I know she will love this one..Good luck if this is also a contest..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always encouraging and uplifting..Sara
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