Birthday Reflection

Happy Birthday Delightful Daughter of the Dawn
    ~Designed from the embers of my mind~

Pull down the shades of your blue eyes
Drifting towards evenings soft lullabies 
Supportive bunny pillow 'neath your head 
A fable story that I read 
Snippets of cuddling as I tucked you to bed
Moments shared stitched in my heart
Of your precious life that I did chart
 
You were so much older then your younger then that now

Funny shadow figures on the wall
How we made them look so tall
A puppet show outside, bay window as your stage
Until you fell and puppets accidently plunged
That expression of sheer outrage your face did engage
When your tiny head suddenly accusingly lunged
I laughed 'til I cried as I intuited your desire to expunge

You were so much older then your younger then that now
 
Bubble baths, Pig tails and worn melted slippers 
as you sought warmth from forced hot air
On chilly mornings standing atop the simple heaters grill
As I viewed your nightgown floating up, such a thrill
Precious moments etched in time beyond compare
Simple cans for telephones with knotted plastic wires
As you and your sister shared your different desires
Embers of love that fuel my minds fires, sweetness inspires

You were so much older then your younger then that now

Pummel horse, beam, bars and floor
so many things you wanted to explore
You danced and sailed through the air
So many proud moments we got to share
Index cards for spelling bees
You were always eager to please
Snippets in time we can not freeze
Yet when they circulate from time to time
My minds eye is genuinely appeased

You were so much older then your younger then that now
                  ~ I LOVE YOU~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/2/2017 4:39:00 AM
Beautiful Donna... So full of love.
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Donna Roberts
Date: 10/2/2017 2:21:00 PM
????? Thank you Darren
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Donna Roberts
Date: 10/2/2017 2:21:00 PM
Those question marks are supposed to be hearts ..sorry
Date: 9/30/2017 12:08:00 PM
Lovely write Donna..
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