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Birthday Epitaph

I sat on your big shoulders, a bite-sized     sequel, yet never your     equal in compassion or patience. You helped me reach the sun-ripened apples at the apex while showing me masculinity in balance:     verve guiding steadfast     nerve to harness resolve, smiling with confidence despite perilous risks menacing futures so deftly planned. On this day, I craft an     homage praising your     barrage of blessed hope; behind your every deed, lessons of grace and humor triumphed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/14/2009 7:20:00 PM
With out his blessing we would only be dust in the wind. Great imagery and use of diction John! Many thanks for your kind words. right back atcha!-Always Alexandra
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Date: 4/10/2009 2:13:00 PM
nice....tyler
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Date: 4/10/2009 1:28:00 PM
Excellent tribute, nice structure. we reflect the upbringing we are bestowed. This poem showcases wonderful caring qualities that many dream of...Raul
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Date: 4/10/2009 10:01:00 AM
A loving tribute, John. He showed you all of the great qualities we seek to emulate. Happy Easter! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/10/2009 9:21:00 AM
John very well said and very beautiful - God Bless, MJ
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