Birth and Blessings

Prelude of blessings in the cradle of nature
Bringing tears in my drained eyes’ stature
Care and love personified as dear mother
Door to the world opened by my father.

Door to the world opened by my father
Care and love personified as dear mother
Bringing tears in my drained eyes’ stature
Prelude of blessings in the cradle of nature.



Date of Entry : 12/08/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Romios Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 6:40 AM
Just love this! Pangie xx
Somadas Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 9:39 PM
Thank you Panagiota..
Hawkins Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 11:58 PM
Lovely verse. Pretty little mirror image toes Good luck in Contest Jenish ..
Somadas Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 9:52 PM
Thank you Shirley for your kind support.. Have a great day..
Dutta Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 10:51 PM
Excellent approach for the Mirror-theme. All the best. Love.
Somadas Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 9:51 PM
Thank you Anisha for your kind support..
Deepa Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 1:38 PM
Wow ...lovely concept....chosen for the mirror theme Jenish sir:-) My best wishes for you in the contest.:-) Take care.Warmest regards coming your way!!
Somadas Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 9:51 PM
Thank you Deepa for your support.. Have a great day..
Wolf Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 5:34 PM
Such nice mirror images, Jenish. Nothing like birth and blessings! Lovely penned, gw
Somadas Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 9:32 PM
Thank you Gershon.. Have a great day..
Pandit Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 4:59 AM
How lovely--an ode to birth! Blessings of life!
Somadas Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 9:32 PM
Thank you Vijay for your support..
Trifiatis Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 2:44 AM
The magic of life, the apotheosis of parenthood and the exaltation of happiness. Great writing my friend, Jenish! Blessings
Somadas Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 9:31 PM
Thank you Demetrios.. Your comment is more profound than my poem..
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