Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Poet Rhyme

Birth

BIRTH

                    In the woods of Kree he sits spine  straight erect 
                              Monk bereft of earthly joy and act 
                                 Waft of the perfume of earth 
                                      Fills the evening mirth 
                                            Willow sings 
                                                 Birth 
                                           The Bell rings 
                                       Round the spirit girth 
                             God's light on the brow no dearth 
                     Monk sits pink glow moves heart circumspect 
                   In the woods of Kree he sits spine  straight erect




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                                  Sponsor	Andrea Dietrich
                                        Form: Andreana

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Skat A February 27, 2015 at 10:44 PM Rajat, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 24, 2015 at 1:16 AM Congrats on fine win Rajat wid this awesome write!

Sandra Haight February 23, 2015 at 7:06 PM Nicely done, Rajat! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Rob Carmack February 23, 2015 at 2:48 PM Congrats Rajat.

Richard Lamoureux February 23, 2015 at 8:32 AM Well deserved win!

Casarah Nance February 23, 2015 at 7:53 AM Your poems are always unique! Grats on a well done win! ;)

Paul Callus February 23, 2015 at 4:09 AM Congratulations on your win, Rajat. Like the image and atmosphere that you managed to create; great rhyme, too. // paul

Jan Allison February 23, 2015 at 2:21 AM congrats on your win Rajat:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2015 at 1:11 AM Congratulations in my contest,Rajat. Good rhyming words.

Monterey Sirak February 16, 2015 at 8:03 AM Fantastic images, you bring the world of the monk to life. I also like the name you gave to the form. Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 16, 2015 at 8:14 AM O Monterey. Thank you very much. Hope you are okay. I like the name Andreana for this form but its Andrea's choice which is final.Love

Poesy Relish February 15, 2015 at 11:36 PM Wow Rajat... can visualise the serenityof a monastery in the midst of snow capped mountains... beautiful pen Rajat Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 16, 2015 at 8:10 AM Yes Nad, serenity is an important word in this tremulous world.Love

Dorian Petersen Potter February 15, 2015 at 11:32 AM Very nice pen Rajat! Enjoyed reading your piece, my dearest friend. A 7 from me! Good luck in this contest! In his light! God bless you! I wish you a very lovely day! :) xxx D Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 16, 2015 at 8:07 AM Love D. God bless