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Birth

BIRTH

                    In the woods of Kree he sits spine  straight erect 
                              Monk bereft of earthly joy and act 
                                 Waft of the perfume of earth 
                                      Fills the evening mirth 
                                            Willow sings 
                                                 Birth 
                                           The Bell rings 
                                       Round the spirit girth 
                             God's light on the brow no dearth 
                     Monk sits pink glow moves heart circumspect 
                   In the woods of Kree he sits spine  straight erect




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                                        Form: Andreana

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Skat A Date: 2/27/2015 10:44:00 PM Rajat, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 2/24/2015 1:16:00 AM Congrats on fine win Rajat wid this awesome write! Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 2/23/2015 7:06:00 PM Nicely done, Rajat! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Rob Carmack Date: 2/23/2015 2:48:00 PM Congrats Rajat. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/23/2015 8:32:00 AM Well deserved win! Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 2/23/2015 7:53:00 AM Your poems are always unique! Grats on a well done win! ;) Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 2/23/2015 4:09:00 AM Congratulations on your win, Rajat. Like the image and atmosphere that you managed to create; great rhyme, too. // paul Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 2/23/2015 2:21:00 AM congrats on your win Rajat:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/23/2015 1:11:00 AM Congratulations in my contest,Rajat. Good rhyming words. Login to Reply

Monterey Sirak Date: 2/16/2015 8:03:00 AM Fantastic images, you bring the world of the monk to life. I also like the name you gave to the form. Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 2/16/2015 8:14:00 AM O Monterey. Thank you very much. Hope you are okay. I like the name Andreana for this form but its Andrea's choice which is final.Love

Poesy Relish Date: 2/15/2015 11:36:00 PM Wow Rajat... can visualise the serenityof a monastery in the midst of snow capped mountains... beautiful pen Rajat Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 2/16/2015 8:10:00 AM Yes Nad, serenity is an important word in this tremulous world.Love

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 2/15/2015 11:32:00 AM Very nice pen Rajat! Enjoyed reading your piece, my dearest friend. A 7 from me! Good luck in this contest! In his light! God bless you! I wish you a very lovely day! :) xxx D Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 2/16/2015 8:07:00 AM Love D. God bless