Birdsong Blues

It's spring
Birds sing

I hear
Their cheer

Tweet tweet
How sweet

Day one
What fun!

Day two
Doves coo

Day three
What glee

Day four
Crows caw

Day five
Survive

Day six
Wild chicks

Cock crows
Ire grows

Loud quail
Nerves frail 

All week
Gulls shriek

Cheep cheep
No sleep

Mad tit
That's it!

Have words
With birds

Spring’s past
At last

No din;
Lie in!


24.10.20

Completely Your Choice (32)Any Form Any Theme Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand
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Strand Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 9:07 AM
A good sequence footle Wendy
Allison Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 4:22 PM
Dropping back again with many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 6:56 PM
Great imagery ,Wendy , congratulations in your win in Brian's Footle contest. Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 9:49 AM
haha, The birds making you crazy!! Good one, Wendy, and congrats.
Allison Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 11:59 AM
So lovely to read these again Wendy, Many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 2:20 AM
I Absolutely love this humorous footle Wendy. You’re ending is superb! So creative! I am putting this into my faves! Congratulations on your deserving First place win! Thank you for the laughter! Blessings xxoo
Chiri Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 7:09 PM
Wendy lovely win my friend! Congrats!;)
Leffanta Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 12:14 PM
Love your, "Cock crows ire grows"! Aloha! Rico
Watson Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 2:19 AM
Thank you,Rico. They just seemed to come rolling in!
Mcintosh Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 5:27 AM
Love these. So adorable :) God bless you
Watson Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 5:49 AM
It's lovely to hear from you. Thank you for your positive feedback,Regina.
Logan Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 5:10 AM
Wonderfully entertaining footles, Wendy. I'm wondering why the birds were silent on day 3. lol Loved that you took their songs from something glorious to something less appealing. Great write.
Watson Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 5:48 AM
Quite simply because I didn't want to drag it out too long! I'm really glad it appealed, Jenna. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 5:02 AM
oh what a fun string of footles I LOVE it:-) hugs jan xx
Watson Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 5:46 AM
I'm glad it appealed, Jan. I wondered about 'Could shoot That coot' but thought it might offend the keen ornithologists amongst us!
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