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1/24/2025

TRIKU -do join in - Brian Strand's Blog

TRIKU the single word hiku with integral one word title

 

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BIRDSONG

BIRDSONG

pleasing

perfect

pitch
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Ashley Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 6:24 PM
Dear Mark, I adore birdsongs and I adore your alliterative brevity. Beautiful! Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
Toney Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 4:34 AM
Dear Susan, your comment is very much appreciated. What a lovely way to start my day!
Rodgers Avatar
January 30, 2025 at 5:05 AM
Hello Mark, sometimes the simplest words carry the most beauty. This is pure and harmonious, like the very song it reflects. A little Gem! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Toney Avatar
January 30, 2025 at 6:17 AM
Thank you for your kind encouragement, Daniel. BTW, love your “Steampunk” poem!
Foster Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 3:16 AM
A perfectly pleasing poem. Succinct and clever. Well done Mark.
Toney Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 10:56 AM
Margaret, you’ve made my day! Much appreciated.
Narain Avatar
January 24, 2025 at 9:55 AM
Nice
Toney Avatar
January 24, 2025 at 8:03 PM
Thank you, Jay.
Allison Avatar
January 24, 2025 at 9:34 AM
beautiful and i love the alliteration. so few words create such an image xx
Allison Avatar
January 24, 2025 at 9:44 AM
your reply made my day thanks mark xx hugs jan xx
Toney Avatar
January 24, 2025 at 9:37 AM
Thank you for brightening my day, Jan!
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