Sigrid Ermine Poet Enclosed Rhyme

Birds Tell Me

First greetings gaily given
Fair days brighten with benevolence 
Feathered beacons warble crystal incessance
Favour of lurid lyricists to gladdened ears submitted


Choral phenomenas divulge
Cherished ownership of full freedom 
Chasing open hopes, bigger skies speed them
Choices expanded grandly in latitude bold birds hold


Twig feet hop on pavement
Tentative hunters approach tid bits
Thrown among human realm, morsel interest
Tweased piece crumb bomb swallowed is savoured


Message singers send, blatant 
Mindfully stay in sweet place of praise
Melancholy has proximity but elation will prevail
Masters of opportunity, gloss winged indignant makes it



              
                 30th November

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David Walker November 30, 2020 at 3:11 AM Melodic and beautifully structured, Sigrid. Wonderful choice of words. I like it a lot

David Kavanagh November 30, 2020 at 12:00 AM Nature must be in the air for us both, this one is a class act Sigrid, love the line melancholy in proximity but elation will prevail, nothing was going to kill this moment, even the crumb bomb, great choice of language, adds up to an even greater poem, good to have you back cheers David

Newton Ranaweera November 29, 2020 at 6:45 PM Mellifluous; philosophic; and realistic, Sigrid!! Sigrid Ermine November 29, 2020 at 7:27 PM Oh, thank you so much, Newton. It didn't start out with a point,... Thanks for your lovely support.