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The birds of paradise take flight, Their feathers dance in sunlit skies, In vibrant hues, they blaze so bright. The birds of paradise take flight, Through jungle canopies, their light, A living dream before our eyes, The birds of paradise take flight, Their feathers dance in sunlit skies. The birds of paradise take flight, Their feathers dance in sunlit skies, In vibrant hues, they blaze so bright, A living dream before our eyes. With graceful wings, they soar so high, A fleeting glimpse as they pass by.

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Date: 10/9/2024 12:57:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write with a lovely picture. I love the birds of paradise flowers. Enjoy your day....................
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Date: 10/9/2024 10:17:00 AM
- A lovely dream, Jay :) - hugs
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Date: 10/8/2024 6:39:00 PM
Aren't birds amazing Jay, and your name only tells me how much you must adore them, I adore the blue jay and so many species of its kind too. Nice poem
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Date: 10/8/2024 1:11:00 PM
the end line on each verse were my favorite lines in this triolet form. Good job.
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Date: 10/7/2024 8:01:00 PM
Your poem brings these birds to life. It is happy days to see birds flying free. Thanks from a fellow bird lover.
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Date: 10/7/2024 3:55:00 PM
Hello Jay, I love this poem. it will be mh fav.Eenjoy your evening my friend /Darlene/
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