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Birds of Paradise

The birds of paradise take flight,
Their feathers dance in sunlit skies,
In vibrant hues, they blaze so bright.
The birds of paradise take flight,
Through jungle canopies, their light,
A living dream before our eyes,
The birds of paradise take flight,
Their feathers dance in sunlit skies.

The birds of paradise take flight,
Their feathers dance in sunlit skies,
In vibrant hues, they blaze so bright,
A living dream before our eyes.
With graceful wings, they soar so high,
A fleeting glimpse as they pass by.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Goldsmith Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 12:57 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write with a lovely picture. I love the birds of paradise flowers. Enjoy your day....................
Andresen Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 10:17 AM
- A lovely dream, Jay :) - hugs
Rose  Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 6:39 PM
Aren't birds amazing Jay, and your name only tells me how much you must adore them, I adore the blue jay and so many species of its kind too. Nice poem
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 1:11 PM
the end line on each verse were my favorite lines in this triolet form. Good job.
Greenhough Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 8:01 PM
Your poem brings these birds to life. It is happy days to see birds flying free. Thanks from a fellow bird lover.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 3:55 PM
Hello Jay, I love this poem. it will be mh fav.Eenjoy your evening my friend /Darlene/
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