Birds In Sable and Grey

cloaked in sable and grey, birds strut heavily for a funeral march



In One Line Monoku # 9 Contest-- PD Linda
March 16, 2016
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Callus Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 2:53 PM
An image cloaked in sad emotions, Gabby; quite a creative take! Congratulations on this fine win! // paul
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March 30, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Congratulations Gabby on your remarkable win. You never failed to write a jaw-dropping poem! You truly are praiseworthy! Keep up the good work and continue to enjoy the blessings of words and poetry. :) -HANS
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March 29, 2016 at 3:32 AM
Brilliant take Gabby.. congrats on big win!
Dietrich Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 12:43 PM
Great picture you presented. Congrats on the win.
Raven Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 12:07 PM
Hi Gabby, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Different and liked the read....Vlad.
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March 27, 2016 at 12:01 AM
Gabby, Congratulations on your awesome WIN. Thank you for supporting my one line verse contest. Stop by my latest blog "Do You See What I See? if you like." Happy Easter. Love LINDA
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