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Birds Flock

Stygian and cotton white birds are going to take flight from the beach to the unknown For Monoku 9 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Poet Destroyer A Ninth Place 3-15-2016

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Date: 4/1/2016 7:55:00 AM
Hi Nayda. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/1/2016 8:14:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 3/30/2016 3:10:00 PM
Stygian reminds me of hell and darkness, Nayda...a good description of the black bird! I like the idea of flying into the unknown. Congrats on your fine win! // paul
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/30/2016 3:14:00 PM
Thank you Paul
Date: 3/30/2016 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations Nayda on your remarkable win. You never failed to write a jaw-dropping poem! You truly are praiseworthy! Keep up the good work and continue to enjoy the blessings of words and poetry. :) -HANS
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/30/2016 9:25:00 AM
Thank you Hans for your feedback.
Date: 3/29/2016 3:33:00 AM
Brilliant take Nayda.. congrats on big win!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/29/2016 6:32:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Sharma
Date: 3/27/2016 12:45:00 PM
Yes, I felt this same feeling. Congrats on your win and happy Easter!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/27/2016 1:45:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 3/27/2016 12:13:00 PM
Hi Nayda, a wonderful write. Congratulations on your win in the contest. This line sings its way into my faves....Vlad.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/27/2016 1:45:00 PM
Thank you Vladislav
Date: 3/27/2016 12:03:00 AM
Nayda, Congratulations on your awesome WIN. Thank you for supporting my one line verse contest. Stop by my latest blog "Do You See What I See? if you like." Happy Easter. Love LINDA
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/27/2016 12:50:00 AM
Thank you Linda. Happy Easter to you too
Date: 3/17/2016 11:33:00 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest. it will be out tomorrow. LINDA
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/18/2016 7:50:00 AM
You are welcome Linda

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