Birds Flock

Stygian and cotton white birds are going to take flight from the beach to the unknown

















For Monoku 9 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Poet Destroyer A
Ninth Place
3-15-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 7:55 AM
Hi Nayda. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Negron Flores Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 8:14 AM
Thank you
Callus Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 3:10 PM
Stygian reminds me of hell and darkness, Nayda...a good description of the black bird! I like the idea of flying into the unknown. Congrats on your fine win! // paul
Negron Flores Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 3:14 PM
Thank you Paul
Selfa Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 9:07 AM
Congratulations Nayda on your remarkable win. You never failed to write a jaw-dropping poem! You truly are praiseworthy! Keep up the good work and continue to enjoy the blessings of words and poetry. :) -HANS
Negron Flores Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 9:25 AM
Thank you Hans for your feedback.
A. Sharma Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 3:33 AM
Brilliant take Nayda.. congrats on big win!
Negron Flores Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 6:32 AM
Thank you Dr. Sharma
Dietrich Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 12:45 PM
Yes, I felt this same feeling. Congrats on your win and happy Easter!
Negron Flores Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Thank you Andrea
Raven Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 12:13 PM
Hi Nayda, a wonderful write. Congratulations on your win in the contest. This line sings its way into my faves....Vlad.
Negron Flores Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Thank you Vladislav
A   Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 12:03 AM
Nayda, Congratulations on your awesome WIN. Thank you for supporting my one line verse contest. Stop by my latest blog "Do You See What I See? if you like." Happy Easter. Love LINDA
Negron Flores Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 12:50 AM
Thank you Linda. Happy Easter to you too
A   Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 11:33 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest. it will be out tomorrow. LINDA
Negron Flores Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 7:50 AM
You are welcome Linda
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