Birds Eye View

Bird on my porch rail
Head cocked, is observing me
Wonder what you see?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Manaila Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 10:59 AM
Brilliant haiku, Mark.
Hughes Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 11:49 AM
Ghita, Thank You for taking the time to read and commenting! It is very ironic, your name, if I am not mistaken, means beautiful song. I would call my wife Ghita as a pet name, among many others, while she was alive.
Cresswell Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 10:08 AM
Gosh yes I wonder too. Such a huge thought in a few words. Well done.
Sands Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 7:24 AM
I can just picture this. So cute :) I love it !
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