Birds

multifarious 
group high-rise birdbath bathing....  
sunny winter morn

birdweatherhaiku

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Howard Kerr

December 24, 2025 at 2:36 AM

This is an outstanding Haiku, Sara. Imagery, word selection and narrative beyond compare. I enjoyed it. A must read for aspiring Haiku Writers, Howard

Sara Kendrick

December 24, 2025 at 8:33 AM

Thank you, Howard. Your reviews are always encouraging. Those poor birds were suffering in the cold of winter. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

December 30, 2022 at 3:19 AM

Great imagery,

Sara Kendrick

December 30, 2022 at 4:02 AM

Thank you, Victor. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

December 29, 2022 at 7:20 PM

Sweet!

Sara Kendrick

December 30, 2022 at 3:04 AM

Thank you, Kim. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

December 29, 2022 at 7:02 PM

So sweet and line one is a new word for me

Sara Kendrick

December 30, 2022 at 3:04 AM

Andrea, Glad I could introduce you to a new word. Every time I hear that word my mind goes to another word that I associate with villains. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Sotto Poet

December 29, 2022 at 4:26 PM

It seems to me that you are becoming increasingly skilled at the haiku form. Your mental imagery continues to evolve and become more in-depth with each new one. Blessings

Sara Kendrick

December 30, 2022 at 2:53 AM

Thank you, Lasaad for the compliment. I appreciate the visit. Sara