Birds

Bouncing up and down
Imitating dancing clown
Ravishing birds do
Dance, sing, hop, speak and amuse
Soothing are those flying hues


For the contest Tankacrostic by Andrea
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Merryman Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 2:12 PM
Creatively written, Supraja! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Y. Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 1:47 PM
Hi Supraja, This is a lovely write about birds. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 12:10 PM
this is utterly charming. Love the imagery of these cute birds. Congrats in my contest.
Callus Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 6:53 AM
I enjoyed this Tankacrostic, Supraja. Line no 4 perfectly fits my cockatiel!! Best regards // paul
Foster Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 1:10 PM
I like the dancing part... they are all over my porch every day... quite the party going on. Nice write. Have a super day. Ann
Sands Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 5:30 AM
I love this. They do exactly as you write about and I can see it :)
Daniel Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 2:47 AM
God's beautiful creation, Supraja and you have described them well:)
Gauthier Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 7:16 PM
Sweet, Supraja ~
Kulkarni Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 12:39 PM
Perfect description of birds' dances Supraja :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 7:57 AM
You discribed birds well in your acrostic Supraja, best of luck in the contest. Tom
Pandit Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 7:43 AM
This is so well written--I see the birds frolicking in your words.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 6:54 AM
Great description of birds. They are such loveable creatures.
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May 17, 2021 at 5:23 AM
Magnificent Acrostic, my dearest friend, Supraja! I adore it! Good luck! A winner! Hugs xxx
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