Birds

Bouncing up and down Imitating dancing clown Ravishing birds do Dance, sing, hop, speak and amuse Soothing are those flying hues For the contest Tankacrostic by Andrea

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Kim Merryman

Date: 6/8/2021 2:12:00 PM

Creatively written, Supraja! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/6/2021 1:47:00 PM

Hi Supraja, This is a lovely write about birds. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2021 12:10:00 PM

this is utterly charming. Love the imagery of these cute birds. Congrats in my contest.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/31/2021 6:53:00 AM

I enjoyed this Tankacrostic, Supraja. Line no 4 perfectly fits my cockatiel!! Best regards // paul

Ann Foster

Date: 5/20/2021 1:10:00 PM

I like the dancing part... they are all over my porch every day... quite the party going on. Nice write. Have a super day. Ann

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/18/2021 5:30:00 AM

I love this. They do exactly as you write about and I can see it :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/18/2021 2:47:00 AM

God's beautiful creation, Supraja and you have described them well:)

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/17/2021 7:16:00 PM

Sweet, Supraja ~

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 5/17/2021 12:39:00 PM

Perfect description of birds' dances Supraja :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/17/2021 7:57:00 AM

You discribed birds well in your acrostic Supraja, best of luck in the contest. Tom

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/17/2021 7:43:00 AM

This is so well written--I see the birds frolicking in your words.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/17/2021 6:54:00 AM

Great description of birds. They are such loveable creatures.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/17/2021 5:23:00 AM

Magnificent Acrostic, my dearest friend, Supraja! I adore it! Good luck! A winner! Hugs xxx