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Bird Sin

White doves from above Dive and descend with ravens Eating Eve's apples

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/1/2011 8:37:00 PM
Those apple are trouble. Loved the feeling in this.
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Date: 6/28/2011 10:36:00 PM
this is very interesting Good angels with bad!
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:04:00 PM
nice little haiku with a clever title, and thanks for your very kind comments on my poems...
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Date: 6/27/2011 12:24:00 PM
Nice thought well said, Johnny
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