Bird Sin

White doves from above
Dive and descend with ravens
Eating Eve's apples
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 8:37 PM
Those apple are trouble. Loved the feeling in this.
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 10:36 PM
this is very interesting Good angels with bad!
Puddifoot Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 5:04 PM
nice little haiku with a clever title, and thanks for your very kind comments on my poems...
Mehta Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 12:24 PM
Nice thought well said, Johnny
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