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Bird of Prey At Work

I am a bird of prey at work Consider myself head of the food chain Keep it to myself of course I fly off before my talons rip or tear shredding my coworkers into rethinking I am proud to be a no-kill predator Here comes one of the baby birds now She flits around, tweeting and trilling I hold myself back

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 1/18/2022 12:51:00 PM

Great metaphor, Caren. I have, in my time, encountered a few "baby birds" whose time had not yet come, but they were convinced they were the fountain of knowledge!~

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/19/2022 11:03:00 PM

It is amazing to me how age 19 thinks they know everything, whereas age 91 knows they know practically nothing.

John Lawless

Date: 1/18/2022 5:47:00 AM

I think you need a rattle Caren....you know....just give it a little shake to alert them to the imminent danger as they approach. Enjoyed this very humorous insight.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/18/2022 8:53:00 AM

Thank you John. Fantastic idea for me!