Notes About The Poem

08/04/25

1401 

First Place

Contest by Brian Strand 

bird of paradise hiku

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Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 4:08 AM
Creative work you have penned in this one. Way to go on your winner. Congratulations!! Sara k
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