Bird Circus

there's a bird circus fluttering, chirping, singing ferris wheels with wings Heidi Sands 10/24/22

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 10/28/2022 4:38:00 AM

Yes sometimes we take for granted the free circus in our own backyards. Delightful poem, Heidi. Hugs, SuZ

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/28/2022 4:50:00 AM

Thank you Suz. I appreciate your comment :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/25/2022 7:37:00 PM

Wonderful image you created, Heidi! Just love it! Thanks, gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/26/2022 6:20:00 AM

Great to hear Gershon! Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/24/2022 12:21:00 PM

Fun to watch them frolic. A lovely, delightful read, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/24/2022 1:52:00 PM

Yes it really is. Thank you Vijay :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/24/2022 11:36:00 AM

Hi Heidi, You penned such a lovely scene. Sign me up to watch the bird circus. Good job:-)Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/24/2022 11:38:00 AM

Thank you Alexis. I will sign you up ! They are very busy and fun to see :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/24/2022 10:46:00 AM

- Like to look at them, Heidi ... a great haiku :) - hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/24/2022 11:17:00 AM

Yes, fun to look at and especially many at once. Thank you. Hugs :)