Bipolar

Blissfully on cloud nine or
Irritable beyond all recognition
Policing yourself to not hurt yourself
Only to hope its not to completion
Longing to be healthy and stable
Aggressive to the outsiders who 
Recommend Lithium for you

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/5/2014 10:39:00 AM

You mean bipolar disorder--severe mood swings. Hope you are well and not on Lithium. Move to poem a very hopeful acrostic thematically and in execution.Love Lauren XXXX RAJAT

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/4/2014 7:34:00 PM

Excellent Acrostic. You nailed it Lauren.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/4/2014 5:45:00 PM

very well written acrostic depitcing this condition :-) hugs jan xx