Binding With Brethren Worlds

A skyscape floats with light's threads
Suspended in an unknown hemisphere
Of eternity, a  pure innocence
Where billion meteors , stars evanesce. I feel
Its rivers and heat blending as one drift,
numberless upon the ladder of creation...

Like a pilgrim of life breaking a thrilled stun,
As  the grandeur of matter and  blue fire
Ignites dawn's birthing , twilight's falling;
That each motion of a planet knows its pull
Before whirling amidst heaven's ray .  I pause...
The god-child  in me sees all brethren worlds
Allowing a force to bind with a holy order
That assigns each ringlet its fluid continuity.

I pause...moved by a galaxy that circles
From a flight roaming to greet my breath
Through seasons' journey , knowing my soul
finds its comfort beyond earth’s frontiers.



Kim Morrison's Soulful Words
by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/11/2014 10:08:00 PM
A fantastic piece...Kim
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Date: 6/19/2014 12:13:00 PM
A wonder nett.....one that must be read more than once to fully enjoy these beautiful words....
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Date: 6/11/2014 6:51:00 PM
Brilliant bravo, loved every line, cheri
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Date: 6/11/2014 7:42:00 AM
You captured my awe with this piece. I expect it will do very well Nette.
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Date: 6/10/2014 1:42:00 PM
Awesome mystical write Nette!
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Date: 6/9/2014 4:18:00 AM
Oh my Nette - You never cease to amaze! I think about these things constantly...Do you remember the movie Close Encounters? When the mother ship lands and the missing WWII airmen emerge and have not aged, one team member says 'Einstein was right' to which his cohort replies, 'Heck, Einstein was probably one of THEM' - Tim
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Date: 6/9/2014 4:27:00 AM
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Date: 6/9/2014 2:24:00 AM
Excellent. Very inspiration write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 6/9/2014 12:43:00 AM
Hi Nette, Very powerful poem. Very strong delivery. Well thought out and structured. I'm very impressed. Keep up the great work. Take care, Earl
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Date: 6/8/2014 9:47:00 PM
A brilliant universe of a poem. I really like the whole idea of being connected with the wonders of outer space as your heavenly language takes me there, Nette!
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Date: 6/8/2014 4:32:00 PM
Nette, your words weave spells that capture me each time I visit your poems. Beautiful!
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