Bilocation

Sounds like bile with relocation, wish to be elsewhere;
Double vision, apparition, somewhere, nowhere, there;

Concurrence, recurrence, boomerang or doppelganger;
concentration, adaptation, cliff-hanger levitation.

Mirror combinations put Alice through the looking glass
sleeping in illusions or dreams of revolution. 

Visitors in time machines leave traces in the places
they invaded - rearranging the derangement of your faces.

How could anything be true, if there were two of you?
Double crossing, double speak, double nothing, no clue.

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Date: 1/29/2024 9:00:00 PM
Your seeming serendipity stimulates the neurons of this old goat. Very enjoyable and plenty of room for thoughts to proliferate, maneuver, and roam around. Thanks, Jeanette. ~ Gershon btw: I had just listened to John Lennon and Yoko Ono singing 'Give Peace a Chance' when I read your first four lines. I was roaring.
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 1/29/2024 9:03:00 PM
Levitating. Glad you had a laugh too. J
Date: 1/27/2024 12:09:00 PM
Your poem perfectly touches on the idea of being in two places at once, feeling like you don't belong, and the confusion that comes with seeing double or experiencing a sense of unreality. Well done. Thanks for your comment on my page
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 1/28/2024 3:20:00 PM
Thank you. Aimed for a playful tone with that kind of undercurrent about trust, confusion and deception ( or the perception of it).
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