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BILOCATION

BILOCATION When you wake in the morning Although it’s half a world away I am right there, by your side We don’t talk, it’s like a mime I still ask, just how can this be Some might call it simultaneity Yet how do I solve this mystery In two places at the same time I’m sure the physics books lied But you’re beautiful, I must say Smiling, as the day is dawning

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Date: 1/27/2024 3:09:00 AM
I like how you express that your mind can really be beside, because of love, half a world away. I like how the first and last lines have a final rhyme with synonyms to bookend the romance.
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Date: 1/24/2024 4:34:00 PM
I like your take on the word. We don't talk either in the morning. It's as if (like your poem) we're in two different mental locations at the same time. Difficult concept to unveil but you did a splendid job...Sara
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