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Billy's Tall Tale - Lol

"Billy, it's time! Get up for school!
Your drawing project's due today.
You know about your teacher's rule;
she must have it without delay."

"But, mom, my arm is hurting bad!
There is no way that I can go.
I must stay home, though I am sad...
I'm really hurting, don't you know."

"But Billy, can you lift your arm?"
"I can't, it's painful and too sore."
So now she asked, with mommy charm,
"how high could you lift it before?"

And Billy raised his arm up tall
above his head...his face turned red!
From his warm bed, he had to crawl...
get ready quick for school instead.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Scars Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 8:23 PM
Sandra! so cute! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Allison Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 7:41 PM
many congrats Sandra this one really made me LOL:-) hugs jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 7:53 AM
Good story, Sandra--cute, funny, and well-written--a 7 for sure. Congrats! Janice
Daniel Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 3:54 AM
Ha ha ha:) poor Billy:) congratulations on HM, Sandra:)
Haight Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 7:37 AM
Thank you, Jo! Hugs, Sandra
Makama Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 12:57 PM
Absolutely brilliant and beautiful. A great 7 for me friend.
Godwin Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 11:05 AM
Great job, Sandra - well done. I enjoyed the read very much ... CayCay
Haight Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 8:36 PM
Thank you so much, CayCay...a fun write for sure. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 1:51 PM
A perfect poem for the contest Sandra! I can just visualize Billy lifting his arm up high, then realizing his mistake. This gave me a big smile. Thanks, Connie ; )
Haight Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 8:35 PM
Thank you, Connie. Glad it made you smile. It was fun to think up and write! Hugs, Sandra
Rv Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 12:24 PM
Hehe, this is FANTASTIC!! Hope it does very well in the contest!! :) :)
Haight Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 8:34 PM
Thanks, Sneha...Glad it made you smile! Hugs, Sandra
Devnath  Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 10:56 AM
Beautiful tale my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
Haight Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 8:34 PM
Thank you very much, BL. It was a fun write. Sandra
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