Saksham Sinha Poet Rhyme

Billions of people will criticise you

Everyone is waiting for their turn,
Few get success few dreams burn,
Don't let yourself at the backfoot,
To achieve success Start from root 

Everyone will criticise you,
Yours closest one will turn and surprise you,
Everyone has different points of view,
When you get success they come to meet you standing in a que.

Once they come to meet you,
Next day they cheat you,
You never lose your hope,
In this world there are thousands of hope 

So, Billions of people will criticise you,
You just do hard work and start from root,
One day you will definitely get the fruit,
It's your turn of pursuit.

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Beata Agustin February 3, 2024 at 9:32 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. Saksham Sinha February 3, 2024 at 10:04 PM Thank you ma'am for your comment , it makes so delightful to write more poems.

Darlene De Beaulieu February 2, 2024 at 11:01 AM Hello Saksham Sinha, It is nice to meet you. this is good advice for everyone. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu February 3, 2024 at 4:41 AM Hello Saksham Siknha, you are welcome. I am a widow. It is m y married name. i do not speak French. Enjoy your day my friend. I have no clue what you said at the end of your comment. /Darlene/ Saksham Sinha February 2, 2024 at 5:51 PM Thanks ma'am for your reply it encourages me to write more poems. Jai shree Ram/Saksham