Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Monoku

Billiards

the ether, a billiard's table -
                           moon the cue ball, stars scattered balls




Place : Honorable Mention


Stardust Poetry Contest
Monoku poetry form only.
Sponsored by: JCB Brul 
Date: 15-04-2023

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Andrea Dietrich April 30, 2023 at 4:24 PM Cool metaphors. Congrats in the contest Patri Venkata Ramana May 1, 2023 at 9:59 AM Thank you so much for the compliments.

Alexis Y. April 29, 2023 at 7:11 AM Hi Patri, Congratulation on your HM. Have a nice day:-) Alexis Patri Venkata Ramana April 29, 2023 at 9:01 AM Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2023 at 2:59 AM - Congratulations :) - hugs Patri Venkata Ramana April 29, 2023 at 6:30 AM Thanks a lot for the best compliments.