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Billiards

the ether, a billiard's table - moon the cue ball, stars scattered balls Place : Honorable Mention Stardust Poetry Contest Monoku poetry form only. Sponsored by: JCB Brul Date: 15-04-2023

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2023 4:24:00 PM

Cool metaphors. Congrats in the contest

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 5/1/2023 9:59:00 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/29/2023 7:11:00 AM

Hi Patri, Congratulation on your HM. Have a nice day:-) Alexis

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 4/29/2023 9:01:00 AM

Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/29/2023 2:59:00 AM

- Congratulations :) - hugs

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 4/29/2023 6:30:00 AM

Thanks a lot for the best compliments.