Eve Roper Poet Verse

Big Surf Shall We Waltz

Big Surf   

Blue
ocean
waves
waxing
down surfboard
out shine!
Time
to load
up woody
wagon make tracks.
Checking out
sandy
beach
big surf
what a gas!
Walk the
board
control
waves.

By: Eve Roper 6/13/2015

Contest Name: Shall We Waltz? 
Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Paul Callus June 18, 2015 at 1:46 PM Very much enjoyed your waltz wave, Eve...ideal for surfing! I love swimming, but never tried surfing, although went as far as water skiing. Congrats on your fine win! // paul

Skat A June 18, 2015 at 1:04 PM Eve, Congratulations on your win. Love **SKAT** Eve Roper June 18, 2015 at 1:42 PM Thank you, Skat, hugs eve

Andrea Dietrich June 17, 2015 at 11:26 PM big congrats. I take it you love to surf? Eve Roper June 18, 2015 at 1:41 PM Andrea, I love the ocean also camping out and watch the boats come in, but I don't surf I cannot even swim I sink. I was motivated to write this piece because of the talk the talk walk the walk contest of the 1960's slang. Thank you so much for the congrats Hugs eve

Kim Merryman June 17, 2015 at 8:54 PM Eve, congrats on your placement in my contest! This reminded me of a Frankie Avalon, Annette Funicello beach movie. Well done! Love, Kim

Joseph May June 17, 2015 at 5:53 PM Congrats on a fine win Eve

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 14, 2015 at 12:28 AM Eve, I love the beach though I had been there only once.. =') love the active image you so present in your poem! Happy SUnday!~olive eloisa Eve Roper June 14, 2015 at 6:03 PM Thank you, Olive, for your inspiration you have blessed me with. Hugs Eve

Robert Lindley June 13, 2015 at 7:07 PM Dancing along with you my friend. A delightful beachy scene and seaside melody.. A7.. Eve Roper June 13, 2015 at 8:57 PM Thank you, Robert, I enjoyed writing this peom. hugs Eve

Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 6:48 PM the sea and dancing seem to be very popular themes for this contest Eve - lovely write - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx Eve Roper June 13, 2015 at 8:58 PM Thank you, Jan, I just got motivated over the 1960's slang. hugs Eve