Bl Devnath Poet Senryu

Big Steps Burdensome

step with little legs
                                               all happy days gone away
                                                  big steps burdensome

                                                  sweet softy eyes tear
                                               Parents and family borne
                                                  rare one today hears

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Andrea Dietrich August 14, 2013 at 2:59 PM i like the contrast here of baby steps with big ones, BL. thanks for seeing my poems. Have a nice day!! Bl Devnath August 16, 2013 at 3:37 AM Many thanks for your comment, my friend. Loved always, bl

Harry Horsman August 13, 2013 at 2:41 PM enjoyed these bl Bl Devnath August 14, 2013 at 11:45 AM Thanks my sweet friend. Always, bl

Shadow Hamilton August 12, 2013 at 4:03 PM Hi BL this describes progress to a T well penned Shadow x smiles Bl Devnath August 14, 2013 at 11:35 AM Hi! my friend, thanks a lot for visiting my page and for giving comment on my write. Loved always, bl

Lucilla Carrillo August 11, 2013 at 3:33 PM Hi Bi; I always take baby steps, before I take a big one. Enjoyed your poem very much. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla Bl Devnath August 12, 2013 at 9:48 AM Thanks a lot for your visit to my page and for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A August 11, 2013 at 1:15 PM BL., little steps, is all it takes... enjoyed....LINDA Bl Devnath August 12, 2013 at 9:47 AM Many thanks for your beautiful comment, my friend. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen August 11, 2013 at 11:44 AM - Lovely bl. - - Have a enjoyable Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath August 12, 2013 at 9:46 AM Thanks a lot, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl