Big Mistake

He created man 
as a dream to be 
an experiment in a bottle 
to be kept you see
he created the world 
as a place to be free
but someone opened the bottle 
and set man on a spree 

Big Mistake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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July 7, 2017 at 8:19 AM
i love this! it reminds me of myself, if i could only play guitar. excellent work barbara!
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