Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Big Hanging Hammock

big hanging hammock
                                              Silken soft wool scattering 
                                                    Hither and thither

                                                 Stars glazing in holes
                                            lovely Moon's resting region
                                                  Hiding rainbow smiles

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Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2012 at 9:35 PM Rereading this one. I find it so lovely.

Harry Horsman September 7, 2012 at 6:37 AM love to be there, swinging on your hammock, bl, your poem so full of peace and tranquility. Bl Devnath September 7, 2012 at 9:24 AM My sweet friend, i always love you. Thanks, bl

Andrea Dietrich September 6, 2012 at 4:06 PM BL, I think this is a lovely poem on the hammock theme! Luv, andrea Bl Devnath September 7, 2012 at 9:23 AM Many thanks for your lovely comment, Always, bl

Gwendolen Song September 6, 2012 at 3:18 PM DING DING DING!!! I am the first one here!....my fav lines are the stars gazing in holes and the moon hiding rainbow smiles...beautifully woven lines, DL. Best luck altho u won't need it! :) gwendolen Bl Devnath September 7, 2012 at 9:22 AM Thanks a lot for your sweet comment, my friend. Loved always, bl