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Big brothers, big brothers, Evidently lovers, With technology advanced, All over the expanse, For above earth’s stance, Doeth not employ, To destroy, Flying in earth’s air space, Far above the human race, This is sadly, the case, While earth’s carnal mind, Can not define, How they are flying, We know they are there, Even the mind doeth declare, But how, and who, Please give us a clue, That we may pursue,, you, Out into the blue, But they already have, If we will open our valve, To the love that we have, Love will lead us out, Of the mind’s gout, Physical clues, left all around, The earth to be found, But first our love, must come around, So put on your, cap and gown, Theology of mind, About God, Is not being God’s sod, The love which is God, Theology of mind, Not big brother’s kind, And will never align, With a lover’s kind, Love must lead, Before we bleed, Mind’s godless greed, There is a seed of love, For lifting above, Time line of mind, These other folds, Of which I’ve told, Of Christly molds, Having followed love, Are flying high above, With master technology, Are not mythology, But of life’s biology, But not of mind’s theology, Mayan hieroglyphics, Giving some specifics, While stones of old, Bugged eyes behold, Higher technology, Not of mind’s theology, While heartless greed, Promotes not,,, God speed, While two voices, Of two choices, One has love’s power, The other is a liar, Choose love’s power, Rise up in this hour, To join big brother, The lover, In true technology!! 7-30-09 johnmosesfreeman@yahoo.com

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Date: 8/24/2014 11:10:00 AM
John, Stopping by to check out a few of the featured poems:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always~ LINDA
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Date: 11/27/2009 12:29:00 PM
OMG where do I start with this magnificent poem from your talented pen.. everything about it is tremendous... everytime I read one of your creations I learn something new and unique ... I am breathless and speechless with your words .. so luv...thankxxx for your wonderfully gracious comments on my poetry today.. hope your turkey day was nice... blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 8/24/2014 11:11:00 AM
I miss you MY BFF....
Date: 10/15/2009 9:36:00 AM
There is more truth to this than you get from governmental statements. I'm worried He will look down and say Enough of this nonsense and start over again. Vince
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Date: 8/13/2009 12:58:00 AM
John, (Moses) You have a way of encircling the mind with words and bringing the reader to the main focus, God. Keep writing, friend. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 8/12/2009 10:51:00 PM
................:YOU RIPped it Moses.... Now this is what I am talking about.... See this is why since I joined this site you are top three poets in my opinion.... Keep them coming......I will keep reading.....:JP]
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Date: 8/8/2009 1:32:00 PM
Holy Moses! You nailed this one! I applaud your theme and appreciate the message that technology need not lead us to greed. With love, technology can improve our lives, our health and bring us closer to God. I especially liked "Love must lead, Before we bleed, Mind’s godless greed." Excellent write! (I'm still moving but was suffering from Soup withdrawal so I have to make time to read your great work!) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/8/2009 4:42:00 AM
I love our Big Brother, too, Moses. God bless you. This write is a great missionary effort as requested in John 3:16. .... Oh, I had a great BIG laugh with your opossum advice. Good idea! LOL Lovinly, Dane
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Date: 8/8/2009 3:38:00 AM
splendid work, thanks for your kins comments on my poetry, I love reading your poems too, faith poems, encourage us and get us even more fired up for the Lord to go and serve and tell of his good works I know God will reach people through our poems, he puts the words into our hearts through his great Love then when we write he does the rest, , God bless you
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Date: 8/6/2009 3:17:00 PM
NIce work...grrth
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Date: 8/6/2009 12:33:00 PM
I love it!! Thanks for the comments! This made my day, BRIGHTER!....Sabrina
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Date: 8/6/2009 10:10:00 AM
a great poem, well written, thanks for your kind comments on my poem who you are, your faith poes are inspiring and uplifting and I enjoy all you writes, God bless you from diane
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Date: 8/6/2009 12:27:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome comments today John.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/5/2009 4:58:00 PM
Thanks for the blog comments Moses ;) Yet have you no thought at all for the value of the teachings of Confucius? Or Buddha or the Tao? The verse above is a meandering ride "up a lazy river" best read as more than one verse, as overwhelming in its length as its depth;) Light & Love
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Date: 8/4/2009 9:03:00 AM
thanks for your welcome comments today John.Rgs Brian
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Date: 8/4/2009 6:23:00 AM
Good Morning John. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem this morning. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2009 8:20:00 PM
as always, Moses, you speak with learned voice, I go to school w/your writes! in God's Hands!!! jimbo
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Date: 8/3/2009 5:31:00 PM
John this is a very interesting poem that not only ask many questions but offers many answers as well - very well written piece - God bless, MJ
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Date: 8/3/2009 3:24:00 PM
Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara
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