Big Brother

He blithely wanders along
Down a near empty street 
Off to see his mates for their
Monthly catch up and meet.
He’s happily unaware that
As he saunters slowly by
His every move is noted 
By that Big Eye in the sky.

He stops to take some money 
From the street cash machine
His every transaction recorded 
His every visit filmed and seen
The internet logs his browsing
He may think it’s a mystery 
But it’s still there even though
He deletes his browsing history.

His location precisely placed
From use of his mobile phone
In these modern times a person
Is very seldom really on his own.
Not quite as Orwell pictured it
But so very very near 
Whether we like it or not
1984 is really here.

Big Brother Is Watching 
They say in a good cause
Helping to maintain stability 
Ensuring we keep the laws.
It supposedly keeps us safe
Every single place we go
But in reality it’s just to
Maintain the Status Quo.
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Date: 11/27/2023 4:28:00 PM
Every pill we take, every doctors visit we make, every illness right down to a sore big toe, big brother knows it all now don't you know. If you travel overseas they know where you go, right down to if paid by your visa, every little snack, and big brother knows exactly when you get back!! Its a scary world. Your poem is brilliant as usual Terry.
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Terry Ireland
Date: 11/30/2023 8:49:00 AM
Spooky, ennit Wen.
Date: 11/23/2023 7:53:00 AM
you are so right, terry! it's definitely a bit (or more) creepy, but i think it will be even worse in the future...
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Terry Ireland
Date: 11/30/2023 8:50:00 AM
I think you are right, ilene.
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