Bid On My Love - the Priceless Soul

Your soul’s love woven maze
      Holds my heart’s fragile gaze

        With each corner’s unveil
          Cupid’s arrows impale

             ~~29 Nov 2015~~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 16, 2015 at 12:49 AM
David, Congrats on your awesome Couplet win. Luv **SKAT**
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December 14, 2015 at 6:45 PM
I love the originality of this one, David. Congrats on the winners' list.
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December 14, 2015 at 10:36 AM
David, congrats on receiving an HM in the "bid on my love" contest:-) Alexis
Inman Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 9:54 AM
David, lovely tapestry you've woven.
Allison Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 3:16 PM
Beautiful imagery David good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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