Bid On My Love - Contest

Bid on my love

Crashing waves, thunderstorm
Soaking wet, yet I'm warm 

Blooming flowers, turtle dove
All four Seasons,  show me love 

H

02-12- -2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Peranteau Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 9:15 AM
it's cute...*vinks, jamez
Waldrop Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 4:02 AM
That is like looking into a mirror for me. Amazing how you wrote this story.
Salmonson Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 3:10 PM
Sounds like a fairy charm.
Clark Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 7:23 AM
love the two extreems very good pictures well done
Boskovski Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 12:42 PM
WOW!! Yet another one that wins me over. A beautiful write with powerful style. "Soaking wet, yet I'm warm" Such imagery and power in such a short write. Well penned my mockingbird, well penned. Love, The Blue Poet, xoxo
A  Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 12:51 AM
MOCKINGBIRD, Congrats on your awesome Couplet win. Luv **SKAT**
Y. Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 10:44 AM
Mockingbird, congrats on receiving an HM in the "bid on my love" contest:-) Alexis
Inman Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 10:13 AM
Very nice write. Interesting interpretation of the theme.
Dietrich Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 8:21 PM
this is so sweet, and I like what Ian said to you. Short and sweet does it!!
Johnson Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 8:50 PM
May you forever and always be loved
Stevenson Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 1:44 AM
Thankyou for reading my poems!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace