Bid On My Love

Bid on my love so I many breathe again
For your caress may wash away the pain!



Bid On My Love Contest
For Kim Merryman
28 Nov 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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March 13, 2016 at 11:11 PM
lovely couplet... Norma. LINDA
A  Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 12:47 AM
NORMA, Congrats on your awesome Couplet win. Luv **SKAT**
Kimathi Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 7:28 AM
A wonderful couplet indeed! Congrats for your WIN in the contest, Norma! ;-)
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 6:36 PM
A very nice couplet. I bet if you had done your second couplet, you'd have made the top ten!
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December 14, 2015 at 10:21 AM
Norma, congrats on receiving an HM in the "bid on my love" contest:-) Alexis
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December 14, 2015 at 9:45 AM
Truly lovely, Norma. (Check your first line.)
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