Beyond the Void

Wobbling on the edge of utter desolation,
 Where thoughts of death become a fascination.
 I take a step backwards and continue to sway,
 Is this the final hand that I will play?

 While what lays behind me is probably eternal rest,
 Is this decision the very best?
 Death is certain and that much I know,
 However there is still life in me left to flow.

 Perhaps this anguish can evolve,
 Maybe this question isn't impossible to solve.
 If I pay a visit to the abyss,
 There are so many things here that I will miss.

 Some things good and some things bad,
 Joyful events and those which are sad.
 When will this perspective shift?
 I desperately need my spirits to lift.

 I look in the mirror and remember every scar,
 The result of my despair I need not look far.
 Thoughts race through me, shackles tighten,
 I scream and then peculiarly my sense of awareness begins to heighten.

 A new thought washes through my being,
 I take a second glance in the mirror unsure of what I'm seeing.
 The burden within me feels far lighter,
 A winning result for this righteous fighter.

 The ground stops shaking and I gain some composure,
 Taking a step towards what was once an enclosure.
 Shadows fade away revealing what they left in the dark,
 Being pulled forward my soul begins to embark.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/5/2017 8:09:00 PM
David, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/5/2017 7:08:00 PM
Hi David, a beautiful poem in content, rhythm and rhyme. Congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 8/30/2017 1:04:00 AM
Wonderful write, David, and a true story of survival and overcoming adversity. Thank you for sharing this, and congrats on your win! Blessings!
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Date: 2/1/2017 3:02:00 PM
DAvid, finally seeing this one, which I also see is a WINNER,so a belated congrats for whichever contest you won with it. The rhyme and formatting of it is great. The message is clear, and this is what I like in poetry, a lucid poem that has meaning. Very well done, my friend. A seven.
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Date: 1/19/2017 8:05:00 AM
An impressive write. Congrats on a fine win.
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Date: 1/8/2017 8:42:00 PM
David, this is a very vivid and moving description of someone rising from the pit of depression. Congrats on your well-deserved win. Janice
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