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Beyond the Veil

Beyond the veil where golden choirs sing, The humble heart ascends to greet the King.

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Justin Bordner

Date: 4/28/2025 6:10:00 PM

The King accepts the song with aching mercy, knowing that your tears come not from treachery, rather as lucid loyalty...J.A.B.

Alesia Leach
Date: 5/1/2025 10:45:00 AM

Justin, your comment moved me deeply. “Aching mercy” and “lucid loyalty”--those phrases echo the heart of the poem more perfectly than I could have hoped. Thank you for hearing the quiet truth between the lines and for always offering such soulful reflections. Gratefully, Alesia