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Beyond the Breakers

From beach; crystal clear sanctuary…....
                     
                             beyond; deep blue, an impregnable mystery!

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Arthur Vaso

February 16, 2017 at 10:13 PM

No mystery this is a gem!

Sunita U.D Palawon

February 17, 2017 at 9:43 AM

I'm so glad you appreciate and thanks for the beautiful words. :)

Joanna Daniel

February 15, 2017 at 12:25 AM

A lovely thought in a beautiful monoku, Sunita:) "impregnable mystery", I like that:)

Sunita U.D Palawon

February 17, 2017 at 9:42 AM

Thanks for the read and the lovely words. GL :))

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 14, 2017 at 1:16 PM

- Not always we need so many words ... this monoku line explains a lot - Well done, Sunita - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

February 13, 2017 at 5:19 PM

A deep mystery it is..Nicely penned Sunita

Sunita U.D Palawon

February 14, 2017 at 12:26 PM

Thanks Joseph for the visit and valuable comment. Good luck. :))

Carolyn Devonshire

February 13, 2017 at 11:21 AM

Because we can see the beach, it is like a sanctuary to us. Scientists are still exploring the deep seas and even finding species that were thought to be extinct. Excellent monoku!

Sunita U.D Palawon

February 14, 2017 at 12:25 PM

Thanks Carolyn. It's a pleasure receiving your feedback. I really appreciate. So true, the beautiful surface hide so many things.. All the best. :) Sunita