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Beyond the Breakers

From beach; crystal clear sanctuary….... beyond; deep blue, an impregnable mystery!

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/16/2017 10:13:00 PM

No mystery this is a gem!

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 2/17/2017 9:43:00 AM

I'm so glad you appreciate and thanks for the beautiful words. :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/15/2017 12:25:00 AM

A lovely thought in a beautiful monoku, Sunita:) "impregnable mystery", I like that:)

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 2/17/2017 9:42:00 AM

Thanks for the read and the lovely words. GL :))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/14/2017 1:16:00 PM

- Not always we need so many words ... this monoku line explains a lot - Well done, Sunita - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 2/13/2017 5:19:00 PM

A deep mystery it is..Nicely penned Sunita

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 2/14/2017 12:26:00 PM

Thanks Joseph for the visit and valuable comment. Good luck. :))

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/13/2017 11:21:00 AM

Because we can see the beach, it is like a sanctuary to us. Scientists are still exploring the deep seas and even finding species that were thought to be extinct. Excellent monoku!

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 2/14/2017 12:25:00 PM

Thanks Carolyn. It's a pleasure receiving your feedback. I really appreciate. So true, the beautiful surface hide so many things.. All the best. :) Sunita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2017 8:17:00 PM

oooh, yes, you said a LOT in that one long line, Sunita!!!

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 2/10/2017 9:31:00 PM

Thanks Andrea for your valuable opinion and for the visit. Hugs Sunita.

Phillip Garcia

Date: 2/10/2017 2:50:00 PM

Exactly right. You nailed a concept that I wanted to convey but just couldn't. I love this - it's fluidly written with impactful precision

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 2/10/2017 9:30:00 PM

I'm so happy you read and expressed your opinion. This is encouraging and well appreciated. Thanks a lot. GL :) Sunita