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Beyond the Boardwalk

Beyond the Boardwalk Narrow slats of wood, ticking time step by step, gap by gap follow the rhythm, and the rhyme. Inside the lines, its safer here follow the rest, stay on the map eyes straight ahead, the path is clear. As if on rails, locked to this course has free will abandoned me? maybe it's time to revisit the source. Beyond the boardwalk, now I will tread free of betrayal, beguised as friends along my own path I will travel instead. Stoic

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/12/2012 11:12:00 AM
I like this idea, beyond the boardwalk! Why did you call it a triolet? It's a very nice rhyming poem!
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Stephen Allen
Date: 8/16/2012 8:41:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, you are right, I think I will change it to rhyming rather than triolet. -Stephen
Date: 8/12/2012 10:44:00 AM
Very,very good Triolet poem - Always a pleasure to read your poem Stephen. - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Stephen Allen
Date: 8/16/2012 10:54:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise, Always such a pleasure to read your comments. - Stephen

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