Written, October 4, 2025 For The Contest, “Dazzle Of The Deep Field" Sponsor, Gregory Barden
the lines of boundaries are set etched in our minds to not forget that what we see becomes best bet that claims the truth as grounded- yet may become confounded we look at stars that gleam up high entrapped by boundaries of sky but in that darkness, we ask why these sparkling gems are spinning- for answers, we were clinging these modern times have changed our view of what we thought and what we knew when science gifted its breakthrough- space boundaries seem slacking- our knowledge, now backtracking with Hubble Telescope, we found thousands of galaxies abound we thought were only stars, newfound- now boundaries, erasing and endless space embracing. each galaxy makes up the realm of points of light that overwhelm with telescopic eyes at helm new possibles still brewing while probables we're viewing- beauty in this darkness shown- perhaps we're not alone
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