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Beyond the Abyss

The sun shines nigh and ice is pearled, White clouds rest upon mountain peaks, In this new and wondrous world Winters winds gently kiss your cheeks, Oceans filled with joy and splendid bliss Gently flow far beyond the abyss Chiquita Baity Sponsor -john freeman Contest Name- New Contest: Another, Nature Verse

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/3/2011 9:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the "Another, Nature Verse" contest Chiquita. Love, Carol

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 10/2/2011 6:36:00 PM

Awesome write,Chiquita.Congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest"Another,Nature verse" by John.

John Freeman

Date: 10/2/2011 5:10:00 PM

Thanks Chiquita, the pleaure was mine, in reading your beautifully imaregy of nature. Thankss for your patronage. Agpe, Moses

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/2/2011 1:43:00 AM

My apologies for taking so long to send congratulations but I have not been well. I am sending congrats now. Take care. Lee

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/1/2011 12:35:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Chiquita

Bob Quigley

Date: 10/1/2011 10:46:00 AM

Well written Chiquita. Congratulations on your win

Kash Poet

Date: 9/30/2011 3:13:00 PM

Nice approach here to the contest photo Chiquita.Enjoyed.Best wishes for the contest.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 9/27/2011 10:19:00 PM

Picturesque. Vince

Prince Ekpemandu

Date: 9/26/2011 3:06:00 PM

nice one.....you always give me a reason to smile any time i ready your poem

Kingsley Awoh

Date: 9/26/2011 12:42:00 PM

full of imagery...great pen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/23/2011 6:51:00 PM

Happy weekend I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Chiquita. Love, Carol

Terrell Martin

Date: 9/23/2011 3:31:00 PM

Another beautiful poem Chiquita and did I say thanks for just being you today?

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/23/2011 4:26:00 AM

What a tremendously wonderful write Chiquita! I caught right off the bat that this is for the contest, it was that good! I really enjoyed your incredible poem!! Awesome work!!