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Beyond Suffering

Breath deeply my child, eyes closed my child, you'll soon be beyond suffering.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/23/2013 10:57:00 AM
I know that this must be how some family members feel when they watch a loved one suffer with some illnesses..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 7/22/2013 11:48:00 PM
This one strikes me as sad. As if the child were dying. Or maybe not. IN any event, i really like it.
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Date: 7/22/2013 12:56:00 PM
Very memorable haiku...congratulations on your win
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Date: 7/22/2013 12:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win:))
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Date: 7/22/2013 6:54:00 AM
Kyle congrats on this fine haiku. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/22/2013 1:16:00 AM
- A winning haiku, with great quality Kyle !!! - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/21/2013 8:13:00 PM
Kyle :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA
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Date: 7/6/2013 11:10:00 PM
a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda
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