Beyond Suffering

Breath deeply my child, 
eyes closed my child, you'll soon be
beyond suffering.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 10:57 AM
I know that this must be how some family members feel when they watch a loved one suffer with some illnesses..Congrats on your win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 11:48 PM
This one strikes me as sad. As if the child were dying. Or maybe not. IN any event, i really like it.
Jones Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 12:56 PM
Very memorable haiku...congratulations on your win
Poet Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 12:02 PM
Congratulations on your win:))
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 6:54 AM
Kyle congrats on this fine haiku. Warm Smiles, Connie
Andresen Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 1:16 AM
- A winning haiku, with great quality Kyle !!! - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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July 21, 2013 at 8:13 PM
Kyle :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA
A   Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 11:10 PM
a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda
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