Nicole Sharon Brown Poet Acrostic

Beyond Repair

Boy I really believe that,
Everything that happened between us this,
Year was quite awful and simultaneously,
Odd. I never thought that I would be with someone who was,
Neglected like me and I would,
Do the things that I did to,

Really make this relationship work.
Experience is the best teacher and this 
Proves that our relationship
And friendship was over when 
It started because two messed up people
Really don’t belong together.


wrote 5-30-10

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 22, 2010 at 5:39 AM It is a pleasure to be reading your poetry this morning Sharon. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with an overload of inspiration. Hoping you will challenge yourself to use all the inspiration which you may receive today. Love, Carol

Joseph Spence Sr June 21, 2010 at 2:51 PM Wow! That's telling it like it is. I like the essence of this poem and the message it sends. There has to be a balancing effect in any relationship. Great job! Joseph

Poet Destroyer A June 21, 2010 at 2:34 PM Wow, deep, love found in two who understand eachother is beauty to the love, enjoyed...P.D.

Sara Kendrick June 21, 2010 at 2:34 PM Two carrying baggage makes the load twice as heavy..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara