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Beyond Reach

It slithered, wounded, off into a breach within the granite face, obscured by brush. Near vanquished in the fight, aroused by cries of nesting thrush, it caught a glimpse, as she skipped blithely by, from its remaining reptilian eye. Scarce mastering the rush, tantalizingly close, but for now, beyond reach… ————- a Mistress Broadstreet stanza (10a-10b-6c-8b-10d-10d-6b-12a) for the Beyond Reach Poetry Contest sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose awitten on 12/26/22

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Date: 12/30/2022 10:22:00 PM
I have never read a poem about a snake that I liked any better than this one and this includes the twenty I have written
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 12/31/2022 3:28:00 AM
A bit of a strange take on the photo, but nobody ever called me normal :-) Thanks for the read!
Date: 12/26/2022 11:56:00 AM
Good luck. Blessings..............
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