Beyond Reach

Beyond Reach


                      The trails that can lead to pure love might be laid

                       ...atop jagged cliffs and menacing glaciers, frigid




                                ___A precursor to my next venture___ 








11/24/2022
Extended Stay America
Lake Worth, Florida
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
November 27, 2022 at 2:29 PM
I imagine that without traversing those jagged edges, love stays impure.
Boles Avatar
November 28, 2022 at 12:10 PM
That's an excellent way of looking at it Gershon, the other is that one must be ready to take the toughest challenges to prove one's worth...ab
Boles Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 10:40 AM
Thank you Lasaad for the positive comment and for sharing your keen perspective. I hope you had a Happy Thanksgiving day with friends and family!...ab
Poet Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 9:40 AM
This a very well-written monoku, Anselmo. Your imagery is of top standards and you conveyed a wonderful picture of the frigid love trail. Good luck in your venture.
Boles Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 11:48 AM
Thanks for your well wishes...ab
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