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Beyond Me

D. Guzzi CT USA lost off 
Fiji lifeboat beached atoll sharks
Spared rescued by islanders
Contact son San Fran CA
Love, takes ashes home
Beautiful trip
Live long and 
Prosper
Ma.

Copyright © Debbie Guzzi | Year Posted 2011

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Gerard Keogh Jr. Date: 3/12/2011 3:39:00 PM You are a poetess even in your mundane messages to yours. Ah, to be like the Headmistress. I hope that he is okay after tsunami! Period gone. THANK YOU! Gerard. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/9/2011 12:11:00 AM Hey, Deb, sorry I missed this one! You sure gave quite a complete description of your circumstances in this tiny form!! I enjoyed your comments in Catie's blog. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Kacey Greenlee Date: 3/8/2011 7:54:00 AM GREAT LOVE IT!Thanks for the ideas on my poem.Yes,understand what I messed up.Will do better next time.Thanks.... Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 3/7/2011 4:00:00 PM Geeez you know I'm long winded LOL I lived there till I died then I was creamated and the ashes and the note put in the bottle!!!! And yes BEAM me UP Scottie! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/7/2011 3:46:00 PM If you were rescued by islanders, what are your ashes doing in the bottle, Deb? Did they burn you at the stake? Just teasing, youknow. Spock would have enjoyed this too. "Live long and prosper," the famous Vulcan greeting. This was fun to read. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 3/6/2011 5:17:00 PM Not true yet BUT if I have to go I want it to be on an adventure NOT in bed! LOL Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/6/2011 2:40:00 PM is this a true story, light?? so profound yet laced with images of reality... i have to whooo! a gem of a nonet! :) hugggs and best wishes, nette Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 3/6/2011 2:16:00 PM yup. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/6/2011 1:44:00 PM Good luck in the contest with this sure winner...Enjoyed reading your imaginative story this afternoon...Sara Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/6/2011 1:27:00 PM Nice analogy, and good luck in the contest, Debbie Login to Reply