Beyond Me

D. Guzzi CT USA lost off 
Fiji lifeboat beached atoll sharks
Spared rescued by islanders
Contact son San Fran CA
Love, takes ashes home
Beautiful trip
Live long and 
Prosper
Ma.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Keogh Jr. Avatar
March 12, 2011 at 3:39 PM
You are a poetess even in your mundane messages to yours. Ah, to be like the Headmistress. I hope that he is okay after tsunami! Period gone. THANK YOU! Gerard.
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 12:11 AM
Hey, Deb, sorry I missed this one! You sure gave quite a complete description of your circumstances in this tiny form!! I enjoyed your comments in Catie's blog. LUv, Andrea
Greenlee Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 7:54 AM
GREAT LOVE IT!Thanks for the ideas on my poem.Yes,understand what I messed up.Will do better next time.Thanks....
Guzzi Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 4:00 PM
Geeez you know I'm long winded LOL I lived there till I died then I was creamated and the ashes and the note put in the bottle!!!! And yes BEAM me UP Scottie!
Devonshire Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 3:46 PM
If you were rescued by islanders, what are your ashes doing in the bottle, Deb? Did they burn you at the stake? Just teasing, youknow. Spock would have enjoyed this too. "Live long and prosper," the famous Vulcan greeting. This was fun to read. Love, Carolyn
Guzzi Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 5:17 PM
Not true yet BUT if I have to go I want it to be on an adventure NOT in bed! LOL
Onclaud Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 2:40 PM
is this a true story, light?? so profound yet laced with images of reality... i have to whooo! a gem of a nonet! :) hugggs and best wishes, nette
Guzzi Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 2:16 PM
yup.
Kendrick Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 1:44 PM
Good luck in the contest with this sure winner...Enjoyed reading your imaginative story this afternoon...Sara
Mehta Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 1:27 PM
Nice analogy, and good luck in the contest, Debbie
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