Beyond Me

D. Guzzi CT USA lost off Fiji lifeboat beached atoll sharks Spared rescued by islanders Contact son San Fran CA Love, takes ashes home Beautiful trip Live long and Prosper Ma.

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Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/12/2011 3:39:00 PM

You are a poetess even in your mundane messages to yours. Ah, to be like the Headmistress. I hope that he is okay after tsunami! Period gone. THANK YOU! Gerard.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2011 12:11:00 AM

Hey, Deb, sorry I missed this one! You sure gave quite a complete description of your circumstances in this tiny form!! I enjoyed your comments in Catie's blog. LUv, Andrea

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 3/8/2011 7:54:00 AM

GREAT LOVE IT!Thanks for the ideas on my poem.Yes,understand what I messed up.Will do better next time.Thanks....

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/7/2011 4:00:00 PM

Geeez you know I'm long winded LOL I lived there till I died then I was creamated and the ashes and the note put in the bottle!!!! And yes BEAM me UP Scottie!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/7/2011 3:46:00 PM

If you were rescued by islanders, what are your ashes doing in the bottle, Deb? Did they burn you at the stake? Just teasing, youknow. Spock would have enjoyed this too. "Live long and prosper," the famous Vulcan greeting. This was fun to read. Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/6/2011 5:17:00 PM

Not true yet BUT if I have to go I want it to be on an adventure NOT in bed! LOL