Beyond Heaven's Gate

Beyond Heaven's Gate

Streams of crystal blue;
Colorful birds tweet and fly,
skip on streets of gold.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Roberts Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 10:21 AM
lovely imagery, congrats on your win
Brown Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 6:04 AM
Congratulations Marie on your win in Linda-Marie Bariana's contest "Heavenly Haiku". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 8:50 PM
VERY nice painting the picture of heaven. Congratulations, MArie.
Green Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 7:55 PM
This is such an incredible visual. Congrats, and great job!
Taylor Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 3:53 PM
Congrats, Marie. Nice going. Ralph
Freeman Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 2:46 PM
Marie, awesom thought congratulations on your success in Linda's contest. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 2:15 PM
Congrats Marie on your second place win in my Heavenly Haiku contest ...amazing.. and thankxxx for supporting my contests.. with luv..
Neels Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 7:03 AM
I love the last line of your Haiku Marie, bb Wilma
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