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Beyond Earth--Instant Telegram

beyond earth's vacuum...

satellite wheel captures light

of galactic forms


Instant Telegram Contest, Nathan D.
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2/19/2016

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David Waldrop

February 25, 2016 at 4:59 PM

Very simplistic I like it nice one I'll read more of your work soon

Bl Devnath

February 19, 2016 at 11:20 AM

Excellent my lovely friend. 7 and Good luck,bl

Harry Horsman

February 19, 2016 at 8:54 AM

Throughout the stars, nette love the imagery..

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

February 19, 2016 at 1:41 AM

Great imagery nette... wonderful!

Timothy Hicks

February 18, 2016 at 11:48 PM

Quite the cosmic image, Nette! I'm really digging the thought that went behind "beyond earth's vacuum" ... are you referring to the Hubble Space Telescope and how it captures such stellar images of different nebulae? That's what I got from this haiku.

Andrea Dietrich

February 18, 2016 at 6:30 PM

very cool, Nette. Is it nathan's contest. I focused on the mountain pic but I think I saw one about this too.

Carly Lalion

February 18, 2016 at 4:19 PM

Your world transcends what is here on earth. An intergalactic union with all the stars just like us. Absolutely grand haiku!

Daniel Turner

February 18, 2016 at 3:39 PM

The great beyond has puzzled mankind for centuries. Your poem reflects the beauty of your mind and the peace in your soul and compels one to look up at night and explore with their mind both inward and outward.

Beyond Earth--Instant Telegram

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