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Bewitched

Beauty beyond compare Breathing her fumes in air By her side like a child Bewildered by her wild Baby blue eyes in pink Beguiled by her wet wink Betrayed all in a blink. Aug.15.2016 Pleiades B - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

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Date: 8/26/2016 3:46:00 AM
Very nice poem.... I loved her...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/29/2016 5:02:00 PM
God bless you too.
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Winged Warrior
Date: 8/26/2016 9:00:00 AM
Thank you Pashang...god bless...^WW^
Date: 8/16/2016 5:04:00 AM
Bewitching indeed:)
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Winged Warrior
Date: 8/16/2016 10:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jo...god bless...^WW^
Date: 8/15/2016 3:26:00 PM
This is really good, WW, considering that you also did it in rhyme! A winner in my eyes. Regards // paul
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Winged Warrior
Date: 8/15/2016 11:29:00 PM
Thank you Paul...to be on time it must rhyme lol...god bless...^WW^
Date: 8/15/2016 2:40:00 PM
Hi WW, I really enjoyed this piece. It was one of favorite shows. As a matter of I still watch it. Great job. I wish you the best of luck in the contest-7:-) Alexis
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Winged Warrior
Date: 8/15/2016 11:04:00 PM
Thak you Alexis...me too...I'll catch a glimpse once in a while...god bless...^WW^
Date: 8/15/2016 2:22:00 PM
Very cleverly written ^WW^ you brought back some childhood memories:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Winged Warrior
Date: 8/15/2016 10:59:00 PM
Thank you Jan...I loved Bewitched...she had magic of her own lol...god bless...^WW^
Date: 8/15/2016 2:20:00 PM
This is good Wing Man. I always did like Elizabeth Montgomery. Good luck!
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Winged Warrior
Date: 8/15/2016 10:54:00 PM
Thank you Daniel...yah I had a crush on her too...god bless...^WW^
Date: 8/15/2016 1:44:00 PM
This is a really good one WW...gl in the contest
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Winged Warrior
Date: 8/15/2016 1:49:00 PM
Thank you Tim...we have a laugh once in a while...god bless...^WW^

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