Bewitched

Beauty beyond compare
Breathing her fumes in air
By her side like a child
Bewildered by her wild
Baby blue eyes in pink
Beguiled by her wet wink
Betrayed all in a blink.


Aug.15.2016
Pleiades B - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kim Merryman
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Salehi Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 3:46 AM
Very nice poem.... I loved her...
Salehi Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 5:02 PM
God bless you too.
Warrior Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 9:00 AM
Thank you Pashang...god bless...^WW^
Daniel Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 5:04 AM
Bewitching indeed:)
Warrior Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 10:01 AM
Thank you so much, Jo...god bless...^WW^
Callus Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 3:26 PM
This is really good, WW, considering that you also did it in rhyme! A winner in my eyes. Regards // paul
Warrior Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 11:29 PM
Thank you Paul...to be on time it must rhyme lol...god bless...^WW^
Y. Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 2:40 PM
Hi WW, I really enjoyed this piece. It was one of favorite shows. As a matter of I still watch it. Great job. I wish you the best of luck in the contest-7:-) Alexis
Warrior Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 11:04 PM
Thak you Alexis...me too...I'll catch a glimpse once in a while...god bless...^WW^
Allison Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 2:22 PM
Very cleverly written ^WW^ you brought back some childhood memories:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Warrior Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 10:59 PM
Thank you Jan...I loved Bewitched...she had magic of her own lol...god bless...^WW^
Turner Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 2:20 PM
This is good Wing Man. I always did like Elizabeth Montgomery. Good luck!
Warrior Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 10:54 PM
Thank you Daniel...yah I had a crush on her too...god bless...^WW^
Smith Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 1:44 PM
This is a really good one WW...gl in the contest
Warrior Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 1:49 PM
Thank you Tim...we have a laugh once in a while...god bless...^WW^
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