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Bewilderment

Within the echo chambers of his mind distorted voices battle to be heard, familiar in tone yet undefined; connections faulty, messages now blurred. An excerpt from my poem 'In disarray' 20.11.19 Rithimus Divisa 6 Poetry Contest sponsored by Gregory Barden

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/15/2020 7:57:00 AM

Congrats on this great winner. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2020 10:57:00 AM

you chose a great quatrain from the original work. I like also the way you changed the title. It's fun trying to think up a different title for these smaller ones, isn't it? congrats on the win.

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/25/2020 7:29:00 PM

Such a great title to a deep and meaningful poem, Wendy. This piece is so evocative and poignant. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan

Wendy Watson
Date: 9/26/2020 12:13:00 AM

I really appreciate your positive feedback,Susan.

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/25/2020 7:10:00 PM

How the mind works always fascinates me, and your poem addresses this so poetically, Wendy. Congrats on your win! :)

Wendy Watson
Date: 9/26/2020 12:13:00 AM

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment,Laura,

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/25/2020 6:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the Rithimus Divisa 6 Premiere Poetry Contest, Wendy - I appreciate you taking the time to enter. This was a contest full of quality, and the placements came down to very small things, indeed - what a joy to read such poetic cream! Blessings, My Friend! :o) <3 (I am shocked mine is the first comment - what a travesty!! This is gorgeous!)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/26/2020 6:06:00 PM

Oh, I think it works wonderfully on its own! I have many poems with no comments ... I think I have bad online breath or something, lol. ;-)

Wendy Watson
Date: 9/26/2020 12:12:00 AM

Thank you so much for the honour,Greg. Maybe my excerpt is less 'stand alone' than others but hopefully, some will read the entire poem.