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Beware the Woman

Beware of a woman with a broken heart She used to be a girl They never see pain coming when it's just the start But a little experience let the truth unfurl She'll take what you have and throw it away Just like a little girl But bat her eyes and beg you to stay And you'll give it another whirl Beware the woman with a broken heart She'll break yours to make amends She'll claim that the two halves are better apart She thinks that's how her story ends Beware the girl with a fragile heart She'll become a woman one day Treat her right from the very start Don't be the one to hurt and run away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/13/2013 9:11:00 AM
Ow this hurts. I have to admit there were a few girls who's hearts I was not careful with. I too have had my heart broken at different times. Now I am especialy careful with my sweeties heart and have been blessed for 21 years by that amazing heart.
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Date: 12/7/2013 10:30:00 PM
I sincerely hope they listen.....beware of the fragile heart. Such sage advice that is. (PS......Thank you so much Juli Michelle, I'm so honored you like my poem for your Rhyme Battle contest....it was fun to write!! Thanks a bunch!)
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Date: 12/7/2013 7:18:00 AM
† With Open Eyes, Her Heart, Her Beauty, Should Be Cherished ˜ Happy Holidays ˜ Love John
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Date: 12/6/2013 5:17:00 PM
Juli...Great style I enjoyed" Beware"!
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Date: 12/6/2013 5:26:00 AM
- A disappointed woman ..... a way to seek comfort ...... - Well written Juli - Michelle ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/6/2013 4:10:00 AM
Fine character drawing of a girl with a broken heart, Juli
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